Before you even start your science fiction story, you
should have plotted out the story either on paper
(best) or in your head. In creative writing,
regardless of the genre, you need to have some idea of
who is going to be the main character, the
protagonist, who is the one that the main character
will have by his or her side throughout the story, or
if there is anyone, and who will be the one who causes
the setbacks, the antagonist.
What do each look like? How old or how young do they
look? Where are they from and are they very educated?
For that matter, in science fiction, you need to let
your prospective readers know if they are human or an
alien from some other world in the galaxy we call the
Milky Way.
Take your main character, when and where was he born?
Did he grow up in the city, and if so from the suburbs
or the slums? Where and how did his family make many
inputs into his life? Put all of this down on paper
and write about that particular character, like you
are describing someone you know well. Get to know this
character as a person in his or her own right.
The above goes for each one of the other characters.
This is called: character profiling. Put everything on
paper, maybe on a 4 by 6 inch card, until you know
them. You are not going to put all the information in
the story but what you know about them and what the
reader must know will come out. Remember, if you know
them as a person, they will feel and sound like
real people.
Remember to ask yourself why the antagonist is the
antagonist. Why is he or she causing problems to the
main character? Is it the main character himself, or
what he is attempting to do? The protagonist will be
the one to turn the story around, will learn from his
or her experiences and will grow as a person toward
the end. The antagonist, on the other hand, will try
to stop the main character's goal in any way he or she
can. In order to do this effectively you must know
your characters just as well as you know those in your
own real-world family.
Ask yourself several questions about each character
and write them down.
1. How does he or she laugh?
2. What kind of thing would make him/her laugh?
3. Can he laugh at himself? Or other people?
4. What kind of temper does he or she have? Violent or
mild mannered?
5. Does he or she dress like most people, or dresses
completely different than others?
6. He is handsome? Is she beautiful, plain, or
average?
7. Is he short? Tall? Medium height?
As a sample of what I mean, let's say you are sending
your cousin several states away because you know
someone who will hire him immediately and your cousin
needs a job as soon as possible. Say his wife is about
to have a baby and he has been out of work and needs
to earn some fast.
You put Bill on the bus where he will arrive in
Tacoma late the following day. With him you send a
typed letter explaining all about your cousin and why
you know he is the one for the job. You also put in as
much information as you can so that your friend or
acquaintance that needs a worker will have an idea of
just who you are sending. Very similar to a resume
but including more personal information than just the
date of birth and where. You also include some of your
cousins past experiences, how well educated he is,
what type of family he might have come from, and what
he has for a personal goal, or goals. For your story
you might add other bits of information such as does
he or she have a problem with something? Is he guilty
from something in the past that he finds it hard to
talk about? If he feels guilty, should he? Maybe once
he survived a crash dive into the ocean but his
co-pilot did not. He tried his best to save him but he
could not. Do you see what I mean? This could affect a
person’s character.
You need as many characters as the story needs. Too
many characters can be confusing for the reader but
too few will make a good story choppy. It may even
make the story seem condensed, or not complete. If you
take the time and effort to do a complete character
profile for each of your characters you will have a
‘rounded out’ cast to play out your story. Publishers
do not want bland stereotyped characters or 2-D
characters, but well rounded out 3-D characters to
give the story a life of its own.


