The Fantasy Novel: Characters

Motivation: To start with, in Fantasy a Quest needs to be decided on and motivation for the hero worked out. Once the plot is drafted, and the author begins to write, it is time to consider the whys and what ifs of the novel. Doing this now can save time when proofreading, eliminating much of the necessity of returning to fill plot flaws. Although only a draft copy, it is now that the author can begin to polish their plot, theme and discover their voice. If the author begins with a hero who is give a quest, the reason for them to leave home has to be strong. Motivation is vital to driving the plot forward. If the reader cannot see the need, or feels they are being conned, the author can save time by not writing the story.

Action Reaction: Every action must be spurred by motivation and must elicit a reaction. Each reaction must drive the plot forward. Every character should offer something to the tapestry of the landscape if not to the actual quest. Even those who are met for moments can be used to add information, conjure emotion, give depth to personality or drive the plot forward. Be ruthless with characters. Life is not an easy road to travel. Don’t pamper readers if the story has a harsh message follow through with a harsh realism. Remember the protagonist must meet the antagonist. Work the personalities to contrast and give your story depth.

Think of how personalities are neither black nor white. An antagonist can have a soft side. In every case, the author must know what motivates the bad guy. In Fantasy there is room for mitigating circumstance, black moments, even time to take a breather. As long as the author knows that at the climax, the final outcome will keep all sides happy.

Things To Do
As you write your novel, keep these hints on motivation in mind. If your manuscript is already written, go over the story, looking at character motivation and reactions.
Make sure all your characters are consistent. Read the story from each character's point of view. Does their motivation and responses work on all levels.

Have a look at the antagonist. Is the evil force truly evil? Does the draft of the novel include the antagonist's back story and what motivates them?

Are the minor characters real? Do they have backgrounds, history and motivation? Remember to use local dialogue, dress, mannerisms and customs to create a style for each race you introduce or create.

Will the readers feel empathy for the Hero and understand the motivation for his journey? Will they share the turmoil of the black moments and sigh with relief when the plot slows for a breather?